DRIVE BY

IN MY STORY THE EDGE MY THREE CHARACTERS GO TO A PARTY ONE NIGHT . AND ONE NIGHT THAT THEY WERE GOING HOME FROM THE PARTY THE WERE  TIRED SO THEN THE OLDEST KID DECIDED TO WALK AHEAD AND THEN A BLACK CAR PULLED UP AND A GUY GOT OUT OF THE CAR AND SHOT HIM. SO AFTER THEY DROVE AWAY THE OTHER TWO KIDS RAN TO THEIR BROTHER AND THEY SAW THAT HE WAS DEAD. AND A FEW MINUTES LATER YOU COULD HERE POLICE CARS COMING TO THE SCENE. AND THEN THE TWO KIDS AND THEIR MOM  HAD TO LIVE WITH THE DEATH OF THEIR BROTHER AND SON FOR THE REST OF THEIR LIFES.