WHAT STUFF?

''I FIGURE I KNOW WHERE JIMMY LEFT THE STUFF HE OWES YOU IF THERE WERE EVER ANY STUFF''.I CHOSE THIS QUOTE BECAUSE IT MADE ALOT OF SENCE TO ME. ALSO I CHOSE IT BECAUSE I THOUGHT THAT THEY DIDNT EVEN KNOW THAT IT WAS UNDER THE HOUSE. SO THAT IS WHY HE WAS ALL CONFUSED ABOUT EVERYTHING THAT WAS GOING ON. SO THEN HE STARTED TO LOOK FOR THE STUFF UNDER THE HOUSE. AND WHEN HE FOUND IT,HE FOUND A CASE AND THEN HE OPENED IT AND IT HAD MONEY.

THE REASON

''I FIGURE I KNOW WHERE JIMMY LEFT THEVSTUFF HE OWES YOU IF THERE EVER WAS ANY STUFF''I CHOSE THIS QUOTE BECAUSE THE DETECTIVE THOUGHT THAT JIMMY WAS PART OF A GANG. SO THAT IS WHY THE THREE GUYS SHOT JIMMY. AND THEN AT THE END OF THE BOOK TITO FINDS A SUITCASE OF MONEY UNDER THE HOUSE. SO THAT IS WHY JIMMY HAD ALL OF THAT MONEY UNDER THE HOUSE, JUST INCASE SOMETHING GOES WRONG. AT LAST YHEY HAD EVERYTHING UNDER COTROL AND EVERYTHING WENT BACK TO NORMAL.

DRIVE BY

IN MY STORY THE EDGE MY THREE CHARACTERS GO TO A PARTY ONE NIGHT . AND ONE NIGHT THAT THEY WERE GOING HOME FROM THE PARTY THE WERE  TIRED SO THEN THE OLDEST KID DECIDED TO WALK AHEAD AND THEN A BLACK CAR PULLED UP AND A GUY GOT OUT OF THE CAR AND SHOT HIM. SO AFTER THEY DROVE AWAY THE OTHER TWO KIDS RAN TO THEIR BROTHER AND THEY SAW THAT HE WAS DEAD. AND A FEW MINUTES LATER YOU COULD HERE POLICE CARS COMING TO THE SCENE. AND THEN THE TWO KIDS AND THEIR MOM  HAD TO LIVE WITH THE DEATH OF THEIR BROTHER AND SON FOR THE REST OF THEIR LIFES.