WHAT I LIKED OR DIDN'T LIKE OF MY BOOK ''ANTHONY MACIAS''

In my book called ''Brian's Hunt'' i liked that he knows how to defend himself or at least try to defend himself. Also I liked how he does whatever he wants when ever he wants. Also I liked and i thought was funny at the same time was when he said that he lived with askunk. But he said he lived with that skunk because he helps him stay safe. And when I mean by safe I mean help him stay alive by keeping the bears or other creatures that could harm him in the woods.

What I didn't like abot my character is that he was scarred most of the time to go into the woods by himself if he didn't have his bow and arrow. Also he was scarred of alot of noises that he heard in the woods. And how he was always having nightmares and saying that half of his dreams actually came true when he was out in the woods by himself trying to learn new ways to survive just incase something would happen to him. Then I didn't like how he was just afraid of anything that he would run into in the woods when he'sout being soposibly a wild man.

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BRIAN'S HUNT [DEVELOPMENT]

In my book my characters name is called Brian. And he likes to be out in the wild because he likes to shoot his bow and arrow. Also he likes to be out in the wild doing things that he couln't do before in his life. Like one of those things is being able to make a fire when he has to make a fire. Also he likes to go camping and make a fire to keep him warm and he always trying to find new ways to be able to survive. But one day out of nowhere he had a suddent feel of fear then he just panicked. And later on in the story i think he would be able to survive when bad things accour when he dont even know it.''HE AWAKEND SOMETIMES WITH SUDDEN FEAR, HIS BREATHCOMING FAST.''
                                        
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LITERARY BLOG POST

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.CLUTCHING,SLINKED,STUNNED,STRIDES,FRIDGE.
.''BRENDAN'S TUPE OF LEUKEMIA HAS A VERY HIGH RATE''
.''YOU'LL FIGHT THIS AND YOU WILL WIN''
.''I WILL BE FIGHTING WITH YOU BRENDAN EVERY STEP OF THE WAY''
.''OH BREN WHEN I HEARD THE NEWS I JUST-I WAS HYSTERICAL. BUT I WANT YOU TO KNOW THAT I'M THERE FOR YOU. I MEAN IT BREN. NO MATTER WHAT.''
.''WHERE GONNA CARRY YOU INTO EVERY GAME AND HELP YOU GET BETTER.''
.''YOU'LL BE FINE NOW!!!.''

SECOND POST OF MY NEW BOOK

IN MY NEW BOOK IT TALKS ABOUT A DISCESE  CALLED LUKEMIA AND A STAR BASKETBALL TEAM CAPTAIN GETS IT . AND FROM THEIR ON IT STARTS TO AFFECT HIM IN HIS BASKETBALL TIME. BECAUSE IT MAKES HIM LAZYER AND HE DOESN'T WANT TO TRY TO PRACTICE AT ALL. AND IT MAKES HIM NOT WANT TO DO ANYTHING AT ALL SO THEN THATS WHEN HIS COACH STARTED TO SEE A CHANGE IN HIM SO THEN THE COACH DECIDED TO PICK A NEW TEAM CAPTAIN.

THE FIRST POST OF THE SECOND BOOK

IN MY SECOND BOOK IT TALKS ABOUT HOW THIS TEAM CAPTAIN HAS LEUKIMIA AND HE DOSEN'T EVEN KNOW THAT HE HAS IT. SO THEN ONE DAY HIS MOM TOOK HIM TO THE DOCTOR FOR HIS DOCTOR'S APPOINTMENT. THEN THE DOCTOR TOLD HIM THAT HE HAD LEUKIMIA. AND HE WAS JUST SHOCKED. SO HE WENT TO HIS BASKETBALL COACH AND TOLD HIM THAT HE HAS LEUKIMIA. AND THEN HIS COACH THOUGHT THAT
IT WAS BAD BUT  THE KID REFUSES TO STOP PLAYING BASKETBALL FOR HIM. AND THEN THE COACH THINKS THAT SOMETHING BAD WOULD HAPPEN TO HIM IF HE DID SOMETHING HE SHOULDN'T DO. SO THEN THE COACH DECIDED TO PICK A NEW TEAM CAPTAINFOR THEIR BASKETBALL TEAM. AND WHEN THE COACH CHOSE A NEW TEAM CAPTAIN HE WAS DISAPPOINTED.AND THEN FROM THEIR ON THEY JUST CONTINUED ON PLAYING OTHER TEAMS WITH A NEW TEAM CAPTAIN.

R.I.P.''JIMMY''

''WE FOUND HER AT THE FUNARAL HOME''.MINA WAS AT THE FUNARAL HOME BECAUSE SHE GOT SCARED ABOUT WHAT COULD HAVW HAD HAPPENED TO HER .SO THEN WHEN SHE GOT SCARRED SHE JUST THOUGHT OF ONE PLACE TO BE AND SHE JUST THOUGHT ABOUT THE FUNARAL HOME WERE JIMMY WAS AT.AND THAT IS PROBABLY WHY SHE RAN TO THE FUNARAL HOME.ALSO PROBABLY BECAUSE SHE MISSED HER BROTHER JIMMY.SO THEN TITO FOUND HER AND THEN TOOK HER HOME.

WHERE'S SPIDER?

''SPIDER RAN AWAY BECAUSE WE'RE TO SAD''HE PROBABLY RAN AWAY BECUASE HE THOUGHT THAT THEY DIDN'T CARE ABOUT HIM ANYMORE. BECAUSE NOW THAT JIMMY DIED HE FEELS LIKE HE IS LEFT OUT OF EVERYTHING.AND ALSO PROBABLY BECAUSE THEY DONT PAY AS MUCH ATTENTION AS THEY USE TO BEFORE JIMMY DIED.AND THEN SINCE HE PROBABLY THOUGHT THAT HE RAN AWAY AND RAN INTO THE GANGMEMBERS.SO LATER THAT DAY THE TWO KIDS WENT TO GO LOOK FOR HIM AND THEY FOUND HIM WITH THE GANGMEMBERS.